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a test poem:rush

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zip zip zip! vite vite vite! hurry hurry!
the world buzzes around in a flurry!
all the scenes ablury!
my thoughts ascurry!...
but why?...
are we not all sly?
we charge and rush and fuss,
it is as if we must!...
but, im tired of it.
for my brain is alit,
twenty-four eight.
it always searches for a mate...
constantly looking for a gate...
out of this madness,into happyness,
...and out of this constant sadness.
do you world, do the same?
or is my mind lame...
to you?
this is a test poem to see how/if anyone reacts to it, i use my poems to vent and thus its all about myself, but, it may apply to others at times as well, if you actually took the time to read it, thanks, and don't be scared to comment, thank you.

(poem spoilers, if you people actually want to interpret it : P)

this, along with another poem that will be after this one, is about the general rush of life, made right after listening to some fast paced (for myself anyways) music. but it also lightly presses into my feeling of isolation from the world at times at the end.
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